Monday, 24 October 2011


This is a new idea for a story, it's going to be quite a sad and seductive story. I believe it will be almost tear jerking.

Which I'm aiming for, is a story that people crave so badly they can't quite literally wait for.

Let me know what you think of the idea, as I'll be posting it right here. The first chapter is going to be called:-

Chapter One: Fear of Falling

His eyes were brimming with tears; the thought of breaking his heart was nothing but torture for me. I didn’t want to end it, but I just wasn’t enough for him. His words fought back against everything that I said, I tried to prove my point but with every word he just screamed back telling me ‘I was wrong,’ I ran my hand lightly across his face whipping the tears from under his eyes.

                “I love you, but you need someone who’s going to be everything you need.” With these finally words I kissed his forehead lightly lingering there for a brief second, I finally coughed up the courage and walked away. I knew he wanted to follow me, I could hear him shuffle. It was for the best, and that was something he had to understand.
                “Please, Jane. I can’t be without you, I need you.” I was only 3 metres away, and stopped for a brief moment. I knew if I went back he wouldn’t let me leave, not this time. I looked at him just once more and mouthed the words ‘I’ll love you forever, but forever we’ll be apart,’ for a moment I felt stupid. Until I succeeded in getting him to turn back towards his home, I hated the fact that I’d done this break up in the middle of the public pathway, but for me getting the whole situation out of my system seemed like a relief. I finally reached the bridge that lead to my home, my friend Diane was waiting patiently on the other side to comfort me in case of emergency. For a moment I thought I didn’t need her, until half way across the bridge I gave in.
                Emotions smothered my face, tears cascaded swiftly down my cheeks and I cried out to Diane, she ran over to me quicker than I thought she could.
                “Oh shit, Jane was it really that bad?” I grasped hold of her tighter than I thought possible, and hid my face in her neck. 

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