Thursday, 29 December 2011

STORY INFO: Beyblades Bites

Yes! I have finally uploaded another chapter of this beautiful story for you and to make it even better, this one is quite saucy.
But you have to read it to find out what happens, I'm currently working on a website and a couple of blogs so I wont be able to get another chapter out today but give it time.

I really would love some feedback on this chapter but obviously there isn't much chance of that happening because no one ever seems to give me feedback even though I ask for it all the time. Would it take so much for someone to leave a comment? God knows!

Either way here is the link for the chapter and if you are reading this please let me know what you think! It's very important to me.


Wednesday, 28 December 2011

STORY INFO: Beyblades Bites

This image really couldn't explain a part of my story better, but trust me it wont make sense until later on. You'll love the part where it'll be in though, my character actually looks quite similar to this anime girl you see the left.

Just remember that my character is called Serena Thomson. She's amazing, but misunderstood.

Wow, I haven't actually realised how often people use characters that are misunderstood I wonder what it is about that character trait that makes it so popular? Perhaps, it's the fact that it adds mystery.

Either way, have a look at the image and keep it in mind because it'll be very important later on. Mind you, you may not remember so I'll make sure to let you all know when I go on about it again.
That's just to make it easier for all you readers, perhaps I should create a soundtrack as well.. Hm, I'm thinking way to far into this now. The story isn't even doing that well, which is kind of depressing. Because honestly, I do love this story and I know it's going to do well when people give it a chance. But I honestly don't think people will.

Okay well I'm done rambling on, so I'll leave you all be. Remember you should all give me a message some time, or something similar. Would be nice to talk to the people who reads my stories.

Tuesday, 27 December 2011

STORY INFO: Beyblades Bites

I would be over the moon if my beyblade story was doing so well, but it's not. Perhaps it's a bit late to be doing a story on beyblade but it would be nice for people to just read the story and then let me know if they don't like it.
I think the story is coming along nicely it's taking a while to get the chapters out but that's just because I need to do my research on beyblade again. Either way I'm going to start promoting it on this website as well. I guess I just really want people to love this story or to get some kind of feedback on it.

Here's the link:

Please let me know what you think of it, because it does honestly mean a lot to me. Actually I'll show you a picture of drew of beyblade when it was out, I'm actually starting to draw the original cast a bit more now but that's just because I'm trying to get good at drawing again.

Thursday, 22 December 2011

STORY INFO: Beyblades Bites

I have posted the third chapter of this story and have done a fair bit of research to familiarise myself with characters and teams, don't forget their bitbeat's. It's taken a little while and I still have some more to find out but it'll be worth it in the long run, I know that once I get all the information I'll be able to add all the details I can to the story and even begin to open up the plot of the story. I would love to be able to get the full potenital of this story.

I'm not sure if I want this story to be a full blown romance, or perhaps a drama. I'm not sure what I do know though is that I am liking the plot I have so far and may do my best to improve it as much as possible. I don't like the idea of the whole story being about Tyson he'll be an important character but no more than that. I would prefer Kai, Ray and also Hilary to be the main characters in my story.
Perhaps this is because they are so under used, I want excitement and a thrill. What better characters then those three, plus my own character. Which of course will add quite a bit of spice. My character is named Serena and I believe to say she'll be quite the character once you get to know her.

Tuesday, 20 December 2011

STORY INFO: Beyblades Bites

As you can see here I have uploaded a new chapter for this story which mean's that is two chapters down a whole lot more to go. I hope you're enjoying this story so far, I honestly think it's going to get quite good. I perhaps a bit sexy? I'm not sure yet, I still have to work more into the story but with a bit of effort and some planning out it could work to it's best.
This may be one of my favourite stories, perhaps that's because it has something to do with my child hood. It's nice to get my child hood out there and show you the kind of adventures I used to plan out in my sleep. It's nice to know people are still interested in Beyblade.
I'm doing my research on Beyblading again as I don't want to make any mistakes with the fine details.

By the way let me know what you think it's the main reason I write stories I want to make my public happy and I believe I can do that with the right feedback. Don't be afraid to criticize my stories either or how I write. It's this kind of feedback that will help me to become a better writer.

Monday, 19 December 2011

STORY INFO: Beyblades Bites

I enjoyed watching Beyblade when I was younger and wrote quite a few stories on the programme, after taking a look through my older stories I can across one that I wrote when I was 14 years old.
The story is bad.. I mean the whole thing sounds quite bad, and I write 'she said' and 'he said' a lot. So after working through the story and altering a lot of information, characters and actual story I've decided to begin reposting it. So far I've managed to write up one complete chapter and have added a couple pages worth of story, which wasn't on the original.

I hope you all enjoy it, after posting the chapter the next thing I had to do was create a book cover and there it is above. Hope you enjoy it, may be worth a read. I know it's got 15 reads so far, lets hope the numbers go up extremely quickly.